Friday, September 7, 2012

My Revision Plan


Wednesday in class I had my research question generation document revised by Sarah Smyder.  My research question is: To what extent does social communication through technology have effects on the literacy of students at the University of Central Florida.  She helped me organize my information and help reword my research question.  After getting her opinion, it was much easier to reword my question into something much more complex.  Sarah said it was good that I clearly stated why I wanted to research on the issue, which is because of my major in education.  It is also clear that I will not use binary thinking on my research.  I also had many grammar mistakes that needed correction and some filler.  I am much more confident on my paper after the revision workshop.  Thanks Sarah! 

Here is my paper: 


Research Question Generation Document
Kimberly King
ENC 1102
Professor Vives
August 31st 2012

My Literacy Past

            Throughout childhood every person has many different influences and experiences that make them unique.  Exposer to literacy has a noticeable impact on a child’s life.  From bedtime stories to social medias, all types of literacy shape an individual’s literacy history.  I am very fortunate to say that my childhood was filled with a positive literacy environment and literacy sponsors that helped me excel in my future.   I will be discussing my literacy environment when I was younger, my literacy sponsors, and my reading/writing habits.
            From the moment I was born literacy was all around me.  My parents were my first literacy sponsors.  Like most parents they quickly did everything they could to teach me how to speak.  When I was an infant, my parents read to me often, especially because my sister was learning to read at the time.  I became interested in listening to my mother, father, and older sister read to me around one year old.  We would have bedtime stories every night and still remember my favorite book being Cloudy With a Chance of Meatballs.  I also recall my love for the library as a young child.  My father works in the hotel business, which forced us to move to seven different states throughout my childhood because of job relocation.  Every new state we would move to I would get excited to receive a new library card.  My mother would take my sister and I to the library regularly to check out new books.  As soon as I walked into the library, I would head straight to the Junie B. Jones books and sometimes I even read them twice.  Books were always involved in my childhood and I am very thankful that my parents exposed me to so much literacy at such a young age. 
            Another kind of literacy I was exposed to in childhood was technology.  I was fortunate enough to have a computer at home.  My mother would buy my sister and I computer games that we couldn’t get enough of, for instance, Oregon Trail, which were both a fun and knowledgeable type of game.  I would also create Neopet accounts.  This was my first time being able to interact with people through the computer.  I then created a MySpace and Facebook, which really got me interested in the computer and all of its perks.  When I received my first essay assignments in middle school I began using Microsoft Word to compose my work.  My sister would help me out with any questions I had on the programs, but for the most part, I clicked around and figured everything out by myself.  I even began downloading books onto my iPad, that I fortunately received as a Christmas present in high school, because I enjoyed reading them on there rather than paper.  I became very “tech savvy” and used a computer for almost everything.
            My parents were my first literacy sponsors and I first realized that they gave me a great literacy background when I began attending school.   My teachers then became my literacy sponsors as well.  I had always somewhat enjoyed my English and Writing classes in school.  I would say I am a creative person and in these classes I was always able to show that side of me.  Summer readings were never a struggle because of my background of reading library books regularly.  I had always received good grades in these classes but never really considered myself an amazing writer. 
            It wasn’t until my summer B session at UCF that I discovered myself as a writer.  I took Composition 1 and our last project about the writing process greatly helped my writing.  We did a “self-study” for a week to discover our reading and writing habits.  Every hour we would write down what we had read or written and rank our feelings, distractions, location, etc.  After I had collected my data, I discovered many patterns in my reading and writing that I could either keep up or change.  The biggest thing I learned from my study, as silly as it sounds, is that distractions work in my favor.  I would need music, breaks, and interruptions to help me get my work done.  If I sat at my desk for three hours straight, I would not be able to write my best work.  I am very glad that I discovered my reading and writing habits my first semester of college. 







Research Question

            For my research paper I wanted to find a topic that I was passionate about in order to ensure that I would enjoy working on it for the rest of the year.  Also, it is proven that you excel most in work you do that you are passionate about, rather than something you don’t enjoy learning about.  For those reasons, I chose to somewhat relate my topic to my major, education.  My question that I want to research about is: What effects does using social communication through technology have on students of the University of Central Florida?  I will be discussing my reasons why I want to research this question, what I would like to learn from it, and how my class readings can relate to it. 
I am interested in researching this question because I have been using social medias and texting for the past few years throughout school and I am curious to what effects it has on myself as well as others.  I feel that playing around on the computer has helped me with problem solving and has enabled me able to figure things out on my own.  I couldn’t imagine not having social networks and texting because all of that easy communication would be lost.   I would also love to be able to share the knowledge I find out about social medias and texting to educate others, since I am an education major.  In my opinion I don’t find a problem with using social medias, however, others think differently.  Some say it effects self-esteem, grammar, and wastes time.  I have seen many cyber bullying instances that really effect teens.  Maybe it should be proven that social medias are becoming more of a negative than a positive. 
I want to learn if texts and social medias are hurting or helping our societies literacy.  I feel it is important to know this answer because of how big social medias and texting have become.  I want to research on the statistics of how fast Facebook and other sites are growing.  Our society may become so focused on these types of communication that it gets out of control and causes negative effects on education.  This research can be used to help our future in either promoting or degrading the two. 
I would want to research people on both sides of my question.  People who feel they cannot live without social networking and texting and people who barely or never use it. My data will be collected from students at the University of Central Florida.  This way I can get both sides of the situation and not be biased.   I will be sure to keep an open mind while doing my research because I know I use social networking and texting frequently.  I would also research about other people’s findings through books and the Internet. 
In the reading, The Future of Literacy, it is explained how technology is advancing in our society and helping with education.  (DeVoss 183-211)  This is the reading that sparked my research question.  The authors claim that learning technology throughout childhood really has its benefits since our society is so heavily based on it.  They declare that it is has a positive effect on our literacy.  I would like to further their research and figure out how accurate their claims are.  

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